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New social media need help please?
Pretend you are working for an agency that specializes in interactive and social media.
Your job is to convince a University to use new media (facebook, twitter, mobile media, online promotions, advergaming, linked in, blogs, second life, email, podcasts, digital video, digital outdoor, etc.) to reach and interact with their target audience (think go army campaign).
Discuss HOW and WHY a University should use ONE TYPE of new media to reach its target audience of high school students. Research this new medium and justify your recommendation with a few facts.
New Media / Social Media is a way to interact . Big companies now a days uses social media to interact and spread their PR news. It is widely used as a public relation news to disseminate / share news. The main task of any social media campaign is to build trust and credibility on a long run.
Sheila E – “Glamorous Life” Performance/Interview at Baldwin Hills Crenshaw Plaza
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I created this patio ad for this construction company and I would like to have some opininons about it.?
First I have a photo of a patio on top of the ad, then this headline: You will love this addition.
Then this text below: A well-planed patio design plus and affordable, top quality installation will enrich your outdoor life while expanding the surrounds and increasing your house value.
With more thatn 25 years of experience in the landscape and construction business, we offer a remarkable patio selection at competitive rates.
Okay, I need some opinions about grammar and headline impact.
Thanks in advance.
Okay, I’m going to be honest with you here, only because you asked…
HEADLINE
Your headline doesn’t really do much for me. It should offer me, the customer, a benefit. Offer me a tangible, physical, or emotional benefit. Will the patio increase the value of my home? Will it provide me more outdoor entertaining space? Will it make my neighbors jealous? Or is the price of the patio so reasonable that I can’t afford NOT to hire you?
Try building a headline around a benefit such as those. For example:
Enjoy A Beautiful Addition With Very Little Subtraction.
See? Now you are telling me that I can do something nice for my home without paying a lot to do so.
BODY COPY:
First, watch out for spelling errors. Secondly, you are starting out your ad with a run on sentence. You also end your ad with a call to action – tell the customer what you want them to do with the information you just gave them.
Here are my revisions:
Enrich your outdoor living experience with a superbly design patio from COMPANY NAME. Not only will you expand your outdoor living space, you’ll actually improve the value of your home, too.
With more than 25 years of experience in landscaping and construction, COMPANY NAME can design a patio to complement your home at a price that fits your budget.
And that’s a promise you can write in concrete.
Call today for a free design consultation.
Company Name
Phone * Web site address
I hope this helps. Good luck with your ad.
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Active Life European History
what is wrong with my free response essay’s intro/thesis statement?
my ap us history teacher said i didnt cleary state a strong thesis statement. tell me if you disagree or if you can some helpful comments thanks!
Before the American Revolution, religious liberty held a powerful role and attracted people from all over Europe to come to America; this resulted in a greatly diverse, conflict-ridden, and religiously active colonial life. A main source of this religious diversity was from the diversity of the European nations, such that each country had immigrants coming to the colonies, bringing along their unique religious beliefs. The supporters of a belief helped shape colonial life through their religiously justified actions and associated events, the most influential of these events being the Great Awakening. The strength of the beliefs came from the leaders, who integrated their beliefs to fit into the lifestyle of the colony; this resulted in the first true melting pot society amongst other things.
I think you maybe got lost in the amount of information you tried to give in your opening paragraph. A thesis statement is simply that, a statement. All you need is to give a statement of your topic and what you intend to prove with the body of your paper. I have done a brief re-write of your paragraph which may help you to understand what I mean. The last sentence would be considered the thesis statement.
EXAMPLE:
Europeans came to America primarily seeking religious freedom. Each group brought their individual religious belief system creating a diverse society throughout the American colonies. America became a true melting pot not only because of the many different nationalities arriving on its shores, but also from the variety of religious practices of these groups.
Paragraph 2…. information on who the people were and what religions they practiced
And so on….
Partial history of the Eurovision Song Contest part one of three
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